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Sunday, December 25

Happy Holidays!

Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

I hope you stuffed yourself silly with Christmas dinner and was spoilt silly by your loved ones! This year my boyfriend went along with the Doctor Who theme for my presents.. check it out below! Was a bit disappointed by this year's xmas episode (and this year's series too, I guess), think they need to either replace Moffet as the main writer or have more writers on board! Please Santa, just this one thing so Doctor Who isn't ruined forever!

Doctor Who and the planet of chocolate!

Nikki x

Saturday, December 10

Thankyou!

Need to say a few thankyous today ~

Thank you to InfurnusUK < http://infurnusuk.deviantart.com/ > for gifting me a 3 month premium membership
And thankyou to my watchers and visitors for giving me over 300 pageviews ^.^
For my 200 pageview mark I uploaded a quick portrait, which got me 60 pageviews in a day (holy crap!!) so might make this a thing to do when I reach a new checkpoint :)

Happy holidays everyone!

Sunday, December 4

RIP Laptop

My laptop died on me today X(
apparently the hard disk stopped responding.
so have to buy a new one :(
Brother who works at currys says I can try to claim on the sales of goods act about durability because I've had it for about a year and a half and it should work for a lot longer, but I've scanned the internet and 6 months comes up along so unsure if I can do this... if not thats a good £70 out of my already low savings :(

Any advice?

Friday, December 2

First Critique

Finally got my first critique today :)
It was for my short story prologue 'The Fifth Wheel' ... read here: http://fav.me/d4g6kci

Here is the critique:

I will say you do a wonderful job on the details/descriptions. It’s hard for me to get those down, so I commend you on doing so. However, sometimes, it’s a bit overwhelming and a bit too much.
The stars transcended the heavens and fell upon the urban vista, gleaming dazzlingly, guarding the night. They cast a ray of midnight sunshine onto the city dwellers as they shuffled to their homes. Some feared the night; some revelled in it. And some were born to breathe and seek the nightfall gloom.
Like here, the first sentence, while it’s nice, it’s a bit much. Stars shinning, falling upon the night view. Stars shine, there’s no need to say that they shined as well. Also, “fell upon the urban vista”? You just said the stars rose into the night sky and now they’re falling as well? All in the same sentence? It sounds contradicting. 
Also, side note, “revelled” should be “reveled”. One “l” in there. I see “colours” in here as well, so I’m not sure if two “l”s is a British thing like the “colours” is. If so, ignore that comment. But according to my knowledge, reveled is only one “l”. 

They sung with joy and drunk with glee, tripping occasionally over rubble and their own feet. 
You mentioned that they were drunkards the sentence before and now they’re drunk with glee. This… I’m not entirely sure I understand what you mean. They’re drunk and drunk on happiness? Or just drunk on happiness? Or drinking while they were happy? I think it’s just the wording you have that confuses me.

His mind drifts to a time when he, too, drank until nothing stayed still and the world surrounding him spun like a carousel... he clings onto the whore he has just won in a round of poker. She is averagely attractive, but knows her way around the male body. Not that he wanted her for that reason – no. The inexorable hunger had dawned again, and called out to him to be pacified, and he couldn't deny it.
“drank until nothing stayed still and the world surrounding him spun like a carousel” <-- When I first read this, I thought you missed a word or something. It didn’t make sense. It took me a couple times to understand what you were saying. Now that I do, it feels like you’re repeating yourself. He’s so drunk that nothing is standing still and it’s spinning. Well, if it’s not still, it’s spinning, isn’t it? 
The second part of it, the italics, where I also have in bold here, is that a memory? I’m a bit confused if it’s a memory or what he’s seeing. I’m assuming memory since it’s in italics, but I’m not entirely sure.

A few other things I’m noticing and wanted to comment on it:
-Adverbs. You have a few of them and adverbs are the tool of the lazy writer. Try to cut back on some of them.
-Show vs. tell. I’m noticing a lot of telling in here. He did this, he did that, he saw this, this happened, etc. I want you to SHOW me what’s going on. Not just tell me he feels hungry. Show me he’s hungry and longs for blood. Say that he needs blood without actually saying he’s hungry and wants blood. This also goes with the adverbs. When you cut out some of the adverbs, you show more. Adverbs tend to tell more than they show.
-Again, your details/descriptions are amazing. But sometimes they’re a bit overkill. Look at them, reread them and see if they flow naturally. Or if you’re repeating yourself. Chances are, you can take out some of them that way, and still keep the details you need without going overboard.

Overall, I enjoyed it. :) It didn’t go out and scream “vampire” but it did have the vampireness in it enough.


Pretty good for a first critique I think :)

LoczyPhotography

my boyfriend joined DA the other day! He's a fantastic photographer (though with a 450D canon, it's almost impossible not to be..!) Here are some samples of his work. Do not claim them as your own or use them without his permission etc. He's watermarked them too so don't even try it xD

http://loczyphotography.deviantart.com/

nikkiandrews.deviantart.com


ArtChani

my friend Chanika joined DA yesterday, she creates fantastic portraits (mainly of celebs, actors, musicians etc) you should check out her page! The images on this post are her creations - please don't claim them as your own or use them without her permission etc. etc, she put alot of hard work into these!

http://artchani.deviantart.com/

nikkiandrews.deviantart.com


Thursday, December 1

Hello Mr Buffalo

and hello pencils, welcome back
do not claim as your own or use without my permission etc.

nikkiandrews.deviantart.com

Wednesday, November 30

Stashing Stock Images

Hey guys,
At the moment I'm currently uploading some photos to Sta.sh on DA
I have some from disney world florida, some animals from the zoo and some photos I took during my bronze duke of edinburgh expedition

Feel free to use them as references etc but please don't claim them as your own

thanks!

nikkiandrews.deviantart.com

FREE FALLING TURTLES!!

Critique Requested

Hey there,
became a premium member on deviantart today which means I can now request critique on my art. I have picked 2:

http://fav.me/d4hon6n Eidolon Characters
http://fav.me/d4g6kci The Fifth Wheel Prologue

please could you say whether you want to see more of the Fifth Wheel stuff too, not sure whether to continue with it as vampires have been used so much recently

nikkiandrews.deviantart.com

Tuesday, November 29

Eidolon Characters - complete

Finished! Do not claim this as your own or use without my permission etc.

nikkiandrews.deviantart.com

Eidolon Lineart

Decided to try out using my tablet and laptop for art... created some lineart using the paths tool which took HOURS!! looks alright though!
Next step is to start colouring which I will probably do today or tomorrow during the strikes.
Wish me luck!
nikkiandrews.deviantart.com

Saturday, November 5

Creating Cartoons with Chris Cox

Today my friend Gwynne got us tickets from the local library for a "talk" with Chris Cox on learning how to write and draw your own story. I thought this was a great opportunity to get some info that will help me on making my own webcomic.

The session lasted for 2 hours and it was Chris, an illustrator and animator, teaching us how to create clear storyboards and different techniques that we can use to make it interesting. We learnt different ways to introduce a character, different shots and what effect they can give, how to use facial expressions and how to create symbols in our stories.

It was a really interesting experience, and with only 7 of us there for the talk it was personal too. A man there who must have been in his 20s told us he didn't like the muppets - and he didn't like squirrels either. needless to say we were very disappointed! You have to keep your inner child alive! There was another quiet woman who created in depth storyboards and very well drawn to, it was interesting to see another hobbyist artist at work. I did feel a bit embarrassed when everyone had created more realistic stories and I had drawn a Mafia giraffe in a car chase...

I think I will go to more talks and sessions from now on because it was really good to work with other artists and pick up new things.. (it would probably do me some good to improve on my social skills too!)

Friday, November 4

Hello!

Hello World!

How are you on this fine November 4th?

My name's Nikki and this is my blog! I'll probably be posting my art stuff here - I say art, what I really mean sketches etc. and whatever fiction I write. You'll find most of it on my DeviantArt page :)

 http://nikkiandrews.deviantart.com/